简介
目前市上的四、六级作文指导书主要讲的是谋篇布局和段落结构;针对语言,要么是提供范文,要么是讲解语法,涉及句子和用词方面的内容少之又少。而对于大多数学生来说,前者最易掌握,后者最为欠缺,且成为制约考生提高写作水平的瓶颈。
本书的编写正是针对广大学生的这一需要,填补了当前国内空白。四大创新帮你在短期内有效提高四、六级作文水平!
创新1:按照循序渐进的科学学习方法,从最简单易学的段落结构内容起步,逐步过渡到较难的句子和用词问题。首次涉及四、六级作文考试写作过程中的核心难点——语言,即如何选词、造句。
创新2:结合实例,分析考生句式呆板、语言罗嗦的原因,通过讲解如保使用或避免使用从句来简化句子、如何使句中关键词的表达更为准确有力、以及重视句式中的平行结构等问题,提供有效解决方法,使表达更为流畅,使语言更为简练。
创新3:针对考生用词不清、表达不准确的问题,精选大量“急需掌握的表达”,对比中国学生常犯错误,使这些考生虽然认识,但却不会使用的有效表达真正成为写作时可信手捏来的素材,使表达更为地道,使语言更有文采。
创新4:由新东方权威写作专家包凡一老师手把手为您逐字逐句修改60篇学生写作原文,并加以详细批注。在真实、具体的应用环境中再现前文所讲述的段落结构、句子和用词问题,理论与实践相结合,凸现本书实战性!
目录
第一章 段落结构的问题
第二章 句子的问题
滥用从句
不会使用短语
不会使用并列结构
下笔时缺乏考虑
It引导的从句达到泛滥的程度
需要使用从句的情况
第三章 在写作中经常用错的表达
平行结构
one和ones被滥用
意义过于模糊的几个词
写作时应该尽量避免使用的词
第四章 急需掌摊的灰达
第五章 习作评改
四级作文
Passages 1 Welcome to our Club
Passages 2 on the Spring Festival Gala
Passages 3 Students Selecting nmir Lecturers
Passages 4 Volunteer Recruitment
Passages 5 Should the University Campus be Open to Tourists?
Passages 6 Happy Teacher's Day
Passages 7 My Most Favorite Program
Passages 8 The World Is Getting Smaller
Passages 9 Reading Selectively or Extensively
Passages 10 How to Succeed in a Job Interview
Passages 11 What Would Happen If There Were No Power?
Passages 12 Traveling
Passages 13 Books
Passages 14 Bicycle in China
Passages 15 Cooking
Passages 16 Television
Passages 17 Can Money Buy Happiness?
Passages 18 Advantage of a Job Interview
Passages 19 The Two-day Weekend
Passages 20 Global Shortage of Fresh Water
Passages 21 Practice Makes Perfect
Passages 22 Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus
Passages 23 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
Passages 24 Do "Lucky Numbers" Really Bring Good Luck?
Passages 25 Don't Hesitate to Say "No"
Passages 26 How I Finance My College Education
Passages 27 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
Passages 28 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport
Passages 29 The Students of China
Passages 30 Love
Passages 31 The Ever Growing World Population
Passages 32 Underground Cities: Are They Possible?
Passages 33 Living in the City or in the Country
Passages 34 Smoking and Health
Passages 35 Computers
Passages 36 Education
Passages 1 The Celebration of Western Festivals
Passages 2 Should One Expect a Reward
When Doing a Good Deed?
Passages 3 Traveling Abroad
Passages 4 A Letter Declining A Job Offer
Passages 5 Say No to Pirated Products
Passages 6 Health Gains in Developing Countries
Passages 7 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports
Passages 8 Are Pets Good for Mankind?
Passages 9 Teenage Smoking
Passages 10 Buses vs. Private Cars
Passages 11 Should Parents Buy Computers for Their Kids
Passages 12 Advertisements
Passages 13 Family Planning
Passages 14 City Life Vs. Country Life
Passages 15 Failure
Passages 16 A Letter Welcoming Your Schoolmate
Passages 17 How Do I Finance My College Education
Passages 18 Reading Selectively or Extensively
Passages 19 Don't Hesitate to Say "No"
Passages 20 Do "Lucky Numbers" Really Bring
Good Luck?
Passages 21 My View on Fake Commodities
Passages 22 My View on Job-Hopping
Passages 23 Haste Makes Waste
Passages 24 Why Do I Take the College English
Test Band 6?
Passages 25 Should Firecrackers Be Banned?
Passages 26 Wealth and Happiness
Passages 27 Fighting Against Crimes
Passages 28 Economic Development and Pollution
Passages 29 Fast Food
Passages 30 Travelling
Passages 31 Fighting Against Corruption
Passages 32 China's Entry into the WTO
Passages 33 Success in the Bid for Olympic Games
Passages 34 Job Interviews
Passages 35 Traffic Jam
第二章 句子的问题
滥用从句
不会使用短语
不会使用并列结构
下笔时缺乏考虑
It引导的从句达到泛滥的程度
需要使用从句的情况
第三章 在写作中经常用错的表达
平行结构
one和ones被滥用
意义过于模糊的几个词
写作时应该尽量避免使用的词
第四章 急需掌摊的灰达
第五章 习作评改
四级作文
Passages 1 Welcome to our Club
Passages 2 on the Spring Festival Gala
Passages 3 Students Selecting nmir Lecturers
Passages 4 Volunteer Recruitment
Passages 5 Should the University Campus be Open to Tourists?
Passages 6 Happy Teacher's Day
Passages 7 My Most Favorite Program
Passages 8 The World Is Getting Smaller
Passages 9 Reading Selectively or Extensively
Passages 10 How to Succeed in a Job Interview
Passages 11 What Would Happen If There Were No Power?
Passages 12 Traveling
Passages 13 Books
Passages 14 Bicycle in China
Passages 15 Cooking
Passages 16 Television
Passages 17 Can Money Buy Happiness?
Passages 18 Advantage of a Job Interview
Passages 19 The Two-day Weekend
Passages 20 Global Shortage of Fresh Water
Passages 21 Practice Makes Perfect
Passages 22 Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus
Passages 23 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
Passages 24 Do "Lucky Numbers" Really Bring Good Luck?
Passages 25 Don't Hesitate to Say "No"
Passages 26 How I Finance My College Education
Passages 27 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
Passages 28 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport
Passages 29 The Students of China
Passages 30 Love
Passages 31 The Ever Growing World Population
Passages 32 Underground Cities: Are They Possible?
Passages 33 Living in the City or in the Country
Passages 34 Smoking and Health
Passages 35 Computers
Passages 36 Education
Passages 1 The Celebration of Western Festivals
Passages 2 Should One Expect a Reward
When Doing a Good Deed?
Passages 3 Traveling Abroad
Passages 4 A Letter Declining A Job Offer
Passages 5 Say No to Pirated Products
Passages 6 Health Gains in Developing Countries
Passages 7 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports
Passages 8 Are Pets Good for Mankind?
Passages 9 Teenage Smoking
Passages 10 Buses vs. Private Cars
Passages 11 Should Parents Buy Computers for Their Kids
Passages 12 Advertisements
Passages 13 Family Planning
Passages 14 City Life Vs. Country Life
Passages 15 Failure
Passages 16 A Letter Welcoming Your Schoolmate
Passages 17 How Do I Finance My College Education
Passages 18 Reading Selectively or Extensively
Passages 19 Don't Hesitate to Say "No"
Passages 20 Do "Lucky Numbers" Really Bring
Good Luck?
Passages 21 My View on Fake Commodities
Passages 22 My View on Job-Hopping
Passages 23 Haste Makes Waste
Passages 24 Why Do I Take the College English
Test Band 6?
Passages 25 Should Firecrackers Be Banned?
Passages 26 Wealth and Happiness
Passages 27 Fighting Against Crimes
Passages 28 Economic Development and Pollution
Passages 29 Fast Food
Passages 30 Travelling
Passages 31 Fighting Against Corruption
Passages 32 China's Entry into the WTO
Passages 33 Success in the Bid for Olympic Games
Passages 34 Job Interviews
Passages 35 Traffic Jam
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